Hahaha...nice
Thats pretty good for a new timer, lol i remember when i first, my music sounded just like yours. I started about a year ago with no musical expeirence whatsoever, though i'm still not as spectactlar as some artist on newgrounds.
Any way heres some advice. Im assuming your using FL studio, if not ignore this. First if you dont own it and are using the demo...buy it! It helps alot to save and come back. Second, try experimenting with the effects on drums and instuments, they can create a quite drastic change. Third, the songs seem...uh...i dont know how to put this but shallow. Try adding some pads in the backround or ambient noises. Fourth, look at the provided .flps to get a good i dea of what you aiming for or to spark a new idea, but dont copy anything. Fith, expiriment new genre and find somthing you like or are good at. And last keep at it and dont give up.....you always start somewhere. Good luck:)